I wish you had posted this a little more zoomed in. It's a little hard to tell what's going on. I'm not sure that I'd get what the invention is without the caption. I like the guy's confused expression on the bottom. It's definitely clear that this object is destructive instead of useful.
I question where this is taking place? not sure what the guy at the bottom is doing is he playing with them?, but I like the wizard because it indicates there playing a board game, burn mark are clear that the die is a dangerous object,
I think you could trim this concept down to just a perfectly round playing die--highly radioactive + rubber seem to be confusing you. I don't understand what's going on in the panel with the wizard--could you clear that up some?
Yeah, they're in an attic/ multi floor building place. i could close it in a bit and render the top a bit more to make it drop back a bit farther...can we use captions in this? Like an advertisement? Maybe?
And theyre playing some board game (DD, i dont know, he's supposed to be a "geek") with a dice that really doesn't work... at all. the rubber radioactivity was just so i didnt draw a circle with numbers on it... i think nate would eat me if i did that.
I was pretty confused that it was an explosive dice. At first I though the guy downstairs dropped an explosive sunny side up.
I think it might be clearer is the downstairs was eliminated. I also think it might be a good idea to show the board they are playing on. I like the wizard.
aahaha I love the little wizard nerd. I didn't think the illustration was that confusing...I could follow the trail it left by burning through the ceiling/floor. Then again, I saw your title before the piece, so it might have already been in my head.
yea i would say you nailed it with the uselessness of the dice being radio active, and I like the different takes on how to play with it and what it does to a person but I wish it was more zoomed in and clearer on the bottom scene, I think that would help sustain the idea more.
I love the concept but I would just like to see more clarification on what is being shown in the illustration. Does it just burn through the table and floor? That IS pretty useless. I love it!
I think the idea's great, but I agree that it just needs some clarity. Play around with the perspectives a bit, you could get some really cool shots of the ball bouncing everywhere like crazy. Is the wizard suppose to be a geek playing dungans and dragons?
oh yeah, also I couldent access my old blogspot account, so I had to create a new one, this is my new correct address: http://www.ellen-topitzer.blogspot.com/
i like the creepy wizard! he is just... strange, but cute.
i have a problem about the placement. is the radioactive thing happening under the floor? maybe you can make it clear by the randering. i wanna see more value in this.
"i think nate would eat me if i did that." UNTRUE. Simplicity in concept = gold. Circular die is brilliant in itself. You could use the radioactive symbol when clarifying this (http://www.henrycomptonscience.co.uk/online/images/hazard/radioactive.png)
I wish you had posted this a little more zoomed in. It's a little hard to tell what's going on. I'm not sure that I'd get what the invention is without the caption.
ReplyDeleteI like the guy's confused expression on the bottom. It's definitely clear that this object is destructive instead of useful.
I question where this is taking place? not sure what the guy at the bottom is doing is he playing with them?, but I like the wizard because it indicates there playing a board game, burn mark are clear that the die is a dangerous object,
ReplyDeleteI think you could trim this concept down to just a perfectly round playing die--highly radioactive + rubber seem to be confusing you. I don't understand what's going on in the panel with the wizard--could you clear that up some?
ReplyDeleteYeah, they're in an attic/ multi floor building place. i could close it in a bit and render the top a bit more to make it drop back a bit farther...can we use captions in this? Like an advertisement? Maybe?
ReplyDeleteAnd theyre playing some board game (DD, i dont know, he's supposed to be a "geek") with a dice that really doesn't work... at all. the rubber radioactivity was just so i didnt draw a circle with numbers on it... i think nate would eat me if i did that.
ReplyDeleteI was pretty confused that it was an explosive dice. At first I though the guy downstairs dropped an explosive sunny side up.
ReplyDeleteI think it might be clearer is the downstairs was eliminated. I also think it might be a good idea to show the board they are playing on. I like the wizard.
aahaha I love the little wizard nerd.
ReplyDeleteI didn't think the illustration was that confusing...I could follow the trail it left by burning through the ceiling/floor. Then again, I saw your title before the piece, so it might have already been in my head.
yea i would say you nailed it with the uselessness of the dice being radio active, and I like the different takes on how to play with it and what it does to a person but I wish it was more zoomed in and clearer on the bottom scene, I think that would help sustain the idea more.
ReplyDeleteI love the concept but I would just like to see more clarification on what is being shown in the illustration. Does it just burn through the table and floor? That IS pretty useless. I love it!
ReplyDeleteI think the idea's great, but I agree that it just needs some clarity. Play around with the perspectives a bit, you could get some really cool shots of the ball bouncing everywhere like crazy. Is the wizard suppose to be a geek playing dungans and dragons?
ReplyDeleteoh yeah, also I couldent access my old blogspot account, so I had to create a new one, this is my new correct address:
http://www.ellen-topitzer.blogspot.com/
i think the roundness of the die is probably enough justification of being a useless invention, although i appreciate all radioactive things
ReplyDeleteSorry, I don't get your idea. I could tell there is a story, but I don't know what it is. I don't see why the invetion is useless.
ReplyDeletei like the creepy wizard! he is just... strange, but cute.
ReplyDeletei have a problem about the placement.
is the radioactive thing happening under the floor?
maybe you can make it clear by the randering. i wanna see more value in this.
I had to read all the comments to understand what was going on in the picture :(
ReplyDeleteI love the characters though!
"i think nate would eat me if i did that."
ReplyDeleteUNTRUE. Simplicity in concept = gold. Circular die is brilliant in itself.
You could use the radioactive symbol when clarifying this (http://www.henrycomptonscience.co.uk/online/images/hazard/radioactive.png)